May
9th

It hurts

Files under Stories | Posted by Appy

She called me on my phone. I was suprised. Why not? She called me after almost an year. She asked me if i have forgotten her.I was numb not knowing how to react i uttered something i cannot remember now. She wished me, i was happy she remembered my birthday. My joy knew no bounds, which reflected on my expressionless face. People surrounding me were happy. After all i was talking to my childhood friend then bestfriend.
I, as being happy, thanked her asked when is she coming to our hometown. She was silent. I read somethings wrong. Our frequency never betrayed us in past. Soon these was a resonance..i was sad she was never coming back. I wished her luck. She tried to not be oversensitive which she is and burst into cries of which tears rolled from my eyes. She asked me why didn’t i keep contact for so many days. She put some true-false allegations on me. I didn’t say a word. I knew i will get time to clarify myself.
She disconnected,phone then contact,saying it hurts.
I hurriedly tried her number again. The number you’re trying is currenty switched off. I knew she needed time. I gave her. I’m still trying her number. It hurts


8 Responses to “It hurts”

  1. By Omkar on May 9, 2008 | Reply

    hey ! nice story …. :)

  2. By Rajesh on May 11, 2008 | Reply

    Sacchi story hai kya??

  3. By Appy on May 11, 2008 | Reply

    @rajesh these are fictional stories that i scribbled few years back.
    not sure if they make sense…but they just came out.
    will post more if i get good response. :-P

  4. By Sukhdeep on May 12, 2008 | Reply

    for u it was fictional.. bt when i read it…it reminded me of an incident which had lot f similarity to wat u wrote..!!

    Keep Rockin newayz.!!

  5. By rowena on May 13, 2008 | Reply

    wow great story! sensitive too…

    keep doing!!…

  6. By Sathya on May 25, 2008 | Reply

    Great story. /must remember to add your blog RSS to my feed/

    PS: Add subscribe to comments plugin please, pretty please :D

  7. By Omkar on May 26, 2008 | Reply

    @Sathya,
    http://unitechy.com/comments/feed/

  8. By Sathya on May 28, 2008 | Reply

    ^^ RSS Feed for comment will be overkill for me. Subscribe to comments is much better.

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